Prose Police - Elephant box by KirkPattieCake

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Today we policed a short story submitted by fellow booktuber and writer KirkPattieCake: https://www.youtube.com/c/KirkpattieCake

Want to stress again, no hard feelings or any kind of personal attack intended. This is purely a professional critique from two writers to another.

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