Car Sales Promo Video

Car Sales Promo Client Video. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. I create client videos for promotional use. If you would like a one minute video get in touch. I would really like to know your thoughts about the video. Do you think it is up to a good standard? How is the editing? Obviously it's not a mov file so quality is not good but I have the mov file.
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