Prisoner tv theme On the Inside

"ON THE INSIDE"
written by ALLAN CASWELL
http://www.prisoner-cellblockh.co.uk/themetune.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prisoner_%28TV_series%29

earlier posting here
http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=52394

My first attempt at a bare track. I sang this on one take. No alternating verses or editing or enhancements. The chorus has a one 20th of a second second track delay to the first track file.

The song is important to me because, at age 11, I had an epiphany. I'll write about that elsewhere ..
posted in audio at
http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=70099

Verse 1
He used to give me roses
I wish he could again
But that was on the outside
And things were different then

Verse 2
We build our world together
With a love so clear and strong
But that was on the outside
Where did I go wrong?

Chorus
On the inside the sun still shines
And the rain falls down
But the sun and rain are prisoners too
When morning comes around

Verse 3
Last night I dreamed we were together
Sharing all the love we'd known
'Til I had to face the nightmare
Of waking up alone

Repeat Chorus

New Chorus
On the inside the roses grow
They don't mind the stoney ground
But the roses here are prisoners too
When morning comes around

Verse 4
He used to give me roses
I wish he could again
But that was on the outside
And things were different then