Hello Heaven v2

This is a second version. Our friend throught the first version was too "upbeat". What do you think? This version or the first version.

ICYMI: This was produced for a friend of ours, who had lyrics but no music. So, we experimented with AI, which came up with a couple versions. We repeated the process for a mellower version.

This is a non-business project, just for fun, and not much time invested into it.

Here are the original lyrics:

Please, mother mercy
Take me from this place
And the long-winded curses
I hear in my head
The words never listen
And teachers, oh, they never learn
My warmth from the candle
Though I feel too cold to burn
He came from an island
Then he died from the street
And he hurt so bad like a soul breakin'
But he never said nothin' to me, yeah
A'say hello to heaven, heaven, heaven
Say hello to heaven, heaven, heaven, yeah
New like a baby, lost like a prayer
The sky was your playground
But the cold ground was your bed
Oo, I said, poor Stargazer
She's got no tears in her eyes
But fool like a whisper
She knows that love heals all wounds with time
Now it seem like too much love
Is never enough, yeah, you better seek out
Another road 'cause this one has ended abrupt, oh
A'say hello to heaven, heaven, heaven
Say hello to heaven, heaven, heaven, yeah
Say hello to heaven, heaven, heaven, yeah
I, I never wanted
To write these words down for you
With the pages of phrases
Of all the things we'll never do
Hey, so I blow out, out the candle and I put you to bed
Since you can't say to me now
How the dog broke your bone
There's just one thing left to be said
A'say hello to heaven, to heaven, yeah
Say hello to heaven, to heaven, yeah
Say hello to heaven, to heaven, yeah, yeah
Say hello to heaven, to heaven, yeah, yeah, yeah, ooh!

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