Protagonist Goals versus Plot Momentum: Tips from a Develomental Editor

Curious about first person point of view versus third? Wondering how to self-edit your novel or take your writing to the next level? In this full episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell (hartboundediting.com) and Isla Elrick guest host and award winning author steps in for aspiring fantasy author Agnes Wolfe (authorsalcove.com) dig into how narrative choices shape your story—and how to revise with purpose.

This isn't just about fixing grammar; it's about refining your storytelling. Rebecca unpacks how your choice of POV, tense, and narrative depth can elevate or undercut your story, and offers strategies to revise with clarity and intention. You'll learn what works, what doesn't, and how to fix common pitfalls like head-hopping and inconsistent narration—even if you’ve already written your draft.

In This Episode:

First, second, or third person—what fits your story best?
Deep POV vs distant: How to strike the right tone
Present vs past tense: Why it matters
Multi-POV tools (including the creative “Fibonacci method”)
Choosing a POV style that strengthens plot and reader connection
How to revise POV or tense in later drafts without feeling overwhelmed
Whether you're just starting or knee-deep in edits, this episode will help you find your narrative voice and fine-tune your manuscript with confidence.

Recommended Resources:

Developmental Editing Services – hartboundediting.com
Authors’ Alcove Membership Site – authorsalcove.com
Book Giveaway – authorsalcove.org