Silent Hill 2 (Unofficial Trailer)

This was my final project for my MIDI Systems II class. I stripped ALL of the audio from the official trailer and re-did everything from the radio button clicks to the music. The music does however feature raw knuckles of Mark Fishman chugging the fuck out his electric guitar (fuckin sick dude). Give me feedback please! Could you picture seeing this (or rather hearing...) this trailer in a professional theater or is there any cheese in it?
This was my final project for my MIDI Systems II class. I stripped ALL of the audio from the official trailer and re-did everything from the radio button clicks to the music. The music does however feature raw knuckles of Mark Fishman chugging the fuck out his electric guitar (fuckin sick dude). Give me feedback please! Could you picture seeing this (or rather hearing...) this trailer in a professional theater or is there any cheese in it?