Getting Back to It AGAIN - having to retrain my eye

just getting back into the swing of things as I try and ramp up to pages.
I am Bruce Phillips an Illustrator on Shattered Time a Graphic Novel by Marty Rasmussen
Shattered Time introduces the reader to a world where all the wars from past present and future exist on the same planet. The reader will see giant mechanized robots from the future, medieval knights, wizards, Nazis, cyborgs, samurai, androids, goblins, elves, werewolves, shape shifters, etc… Lucius (our main character) is an elemental wizard, trained by elves. He can control the energy of his body and use it to control the energy of the Earth, Wind, Fire, Water, and Life. If you combine elements you can create things; for example, air and water will create lightning. Len, a student of his, discovers a new element, death. With this new energy stolen from the dead he is able to do horrible things—kill with a touch, raise the dead—and when he began combining the death element with the other elements, he found that life and death combine allowing him to control time. Len only desires more power and he gets his power from death so he creates a world full of war by bringing all wars, past, present and future, together. Lucius must convince the world leaders of how it happened even though they blame aliens. He must also recreate the same ritual that Len performed in order to cause this shattering of time but he will need a volunteer from all the different time periods in order to return the world to normal, but first he will have to kill Len and the army of the undead and the shape shifters that now roam freely.