YAIRA #1 Review - Worldbuilding Done Wrong

8 days ago
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A Projexus press conference and company tour gave the Soska Sisters plenty of room to inform us about the environment and context in which Yaira exists. What few worldbuilding crumbs they give us do *not* satisfy.

00:00 Introduction
00:37 This is News?
03:04 ANOTHER Continuity Glitch?
06:01 Name Those Characters!
07:47 Place Dialogue Where It's Needed
08:53 Don't Fill in the Blank with Blanks
10:19 FINALLY a Projexus Mission Statement!
12:45 The Unclean Clean Room
14:13 The Snow-Elephant in the Room
15:39 Cat Scratch Banter
16:55 Worldbuilding the WRONG Way
18:32 Worldbuilding the RIGHT Way
26:57 Conclusion

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