Deliciously Thin Biscuits: A Taste of the Great Depression

7 months ago
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The video starts with an interesting topic but could use a stronger hook to captivate viewers. The lack of structure and coherence makes it difficult to follow the message. It does provide a personal connection through a story but needs a clearer overall purpose. While the topic may interest some, it may not match current trend topics. Improvement is needed in structure and clarity. https://direct.me/afmonline2

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