Let's Fix ALPHACORE #1: It's..."Problematic"

ALPHACORE #1 is here! Is the first non-Eric July-written fare from the Rippaverse any better than its predecessors? I put the call out to see whether my followers could find the same problems I did with the first eight pages. What did they say?

00:00 Introduction
00:54 Review Challenge!
02:03 Ranking the Covers
03:22 Pre-Story Pages
07:34 CAUTION: Editor at Work
10:33 Review Challenge Rules
11:50 Problems vs. Errors
14:05 ALPHACORE 1 Page 1
17:44 ALPHACORE 1 Page 4
23:00 ALPHACORE 1 Page 5
25:49 ALPHACORE 1 Pages 6-7
28:58 ALPHACORE 1 Page 8
33:33 Epilogue: ALPHACORE 1 Pages 9-10
41:43 Conclusion

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