Let's Fix ISOM #2: Eh, Screw It

In my review videos for the first third of ISOM #2, I encountered many reasons to complain, but I still held out hope that later pages might redeem the book. After the second third of ISOM #2, that hope is gone. Game over, man. Game over.

00:00 Introduction
03:37 Dialogue: Vague and Weak
08:15 Bonus: How the Scene Should Have Gone
09:23 WTF Are We Even Doing Here?
16:59 One-Off Mistakes
20:06 Art Slack
23:28 Wasted Space
25:44 Stuff That Makes No Sense
31:21 Ruining Goodyng
34:08 The Three Things That Impressed Me
36:26 Conclusion

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