Awakening to the Deeper Issues: Tackling Problems through Comedy

1 year ago
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The video lacks a strong hook that immediately grabs viewers' attention. It touches on the idea of people waking up to a problem but lacks clarity and specificity. The mention of using comedy feels disconnected. The video lacks a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it difficult for viewers to fully understand the message. The video could benefit from providing more context and a relatable message. While it briefly touches on a popular topic, the lack of specificity may make it less appealing

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