Understanding And Rewriting: Perturabo

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Timestamps:
00:00 Intro
01:37 Perturabo Lore
05:30 (First Aside) Pert overreacting about Olympia being blownup
06:28 What is his character?
06:50 Dour And Shitty
07:00 Fulgrim Excerpt
08:22 Pert Hammer Of Olympia
08:36 Name Day Excerpt
09:46 Emperors Architect
10:12 Great Nephew story
17:16 Logical Cold
17:32 Stone And Iron
20:15 Slaves to Darkness
21:25 Volk Excerpt
33:19 Practical Genius, Humane
33:55 Pert and Fulgrim Facial Abuse
39:25 Magnus the Red Master of NERDS
40:00 Pert and Magnus fool around
47:23 What should his character be
50:11 Relationship with brothers
54:56 Themes
55:39 Human Nature In Conflict with the Logical Mind
56:30 A teacher with good intentions but bad execution
56:57 A logical philosopher, whose starting premise is informed by his Trauma and Cynicism
57:21 Things To Fix
57:36 His Early Life (Fixed)
01:01:50 (Second Aside) Retretcon memory?
01:02:36 Paranoia (Fixed)
01:03:08 HoO Paranoia Excerpt
01:03:57 HoO about to meet the Emperor
01:07:57 Decimation (Fixed)
01:12:06 His Fall (Fixed)
01:12:52 (Thirs Aside) Hrud
01:13:40 Better Fall
01:16:08 Synthesis and Culmination
01:17:37 Outro