RPG Maker - Let's Make a Scene Contest: ♡Heart Edition♡ - Analysis of video entries - PART 1

Hello there folks, the competition found at this link is finally over! https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?threads/lets-make-a-scene-contest-heart-edition-submission-thread.132957/While I also submitted my entry, I thought why not go through each video in and help people with their work and provide valuable feedback on what they may improve. This video covers the first 3 entries only:
0:00:57 - a love story by Xelion (and a story with such a twist!) ^^
0:23:08 - a love story by Azurose!

0:46:17 - a love story by emelian65 (another one with a twist) ^^

To view their videos separately and enjoy them without my breaks one can simply go to the link above and see them. Preferably ALL since I know each one is awesome! Or preferably go to the persons' Youtube channels and win 'em a few likes ^^

I'm not used to how the winners are chosen, but congratulations to everyone who took part in it, looking forward to people's improvement, since I know I am here to help people sharpen skills in detail-handling ^^Wishin' you an awesome day! Hugs, you are appreciated!Whatever you are doing is the best you can at the right pace for you! Stay awesome and live (b)right!

See the other parts here:

Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RofG6QWcLaU
Part 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXVQL0dYcoc
Part 4: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKrvrqH-NZ4
Part 5: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKrvrqH-NZ4