Episode 34: Writing Sight and Sound (Self-Editing Descriptions That Immerse Readers)

Strong scenes start with writing sight and sound, backed by smart show don’t tell writing tips and clear writing immersive description. In this podcast for fantasy authors, we cover how to avoid flat writing, master writing strong descriptions, and apply editing tips for indie authors. Whether you’re focused on writing believable settings or learning how to edit your book yourself, this podcast for fantasy writers gives you practical strategies to sharpen your story.

In this podcast for fantasy authors, we unpack how sight and sound create immersive worldbuilding and help you refine your self-editing process. Learn practical tips for balancing sensory immersion, improving fantasy novel editing, and aligning sensory detail with point of view. If you’ve ever wondered how to write strong descriptions, how to avoid info-dumps, or how to edit your book yourself, this podcast for fantasy writers is for you.

Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and fantasy author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] discuss how to choose the right sensory details, avoid common pitfalls, and connect readers to characters through purposeful description. They also cover how to adjust your approach depending on genre, audience, and scene type.

You’ll learn:
-How to decide what readers need to see and hear
-Why protagonist description matters early in the book
-Tips for using vocabulary and POV to guide immersion
-How to avoid repetitive sensory choices
-When to slim down description (and when to expand it)
-Rules of thumb for writing description in action scenes
-How sensory detail sets tone and reveals worldbuilding

Recommended Resources
-Need a Developmental Editor? hartboundediting.com