Episode 33: Beyond Description: Self-Editing Tangible Worldbuilding in Fantasy Fiction

Join us on this podcast for fantasy writers as we explore self-editing strategies for writers that elevate clothing in fiction, weather, and societal detail into tools for immersive story world development. Rebecca Hartwell and Addie Dulac explain how using worldbuilding details like garments, transportation, and seasonal shifts can do more than set the stage—they can change the story. If you’re looking for practical advice on how to build fictional worlds that actually influence plot and character, this episode is full of smart, actionable guidance.

In this podcast for fantasy authors, we examine tangible worldbuilding, from costuming and coinage to cities, carriages, and climate. You’ll learn how to use setting details to complicate your plot, reinforce theme, and shape tone—all while avoiding common self-editing pitfalls. Whether you write fantasy or historical fiction, this episode will sharpen your self-editing eye and deepen your story’s immersive power.

Want to make your worldbuilding not just present—but impactful? In this episode, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and historical romance author Addie Dulac dive into how to integrate physical world elements in ways that change your story’s direction and enhance character arcs. They explore how tangible details like weather, transportation, and clothing can create turning points, tension, and emotional beats that resonate.

You’ll learn:
-How to identify and fix shallow or surface-level worldbuilding
-Ways to make tangible elements change your plot—not just decorate it
-What to ask yourself about setting on the scene and story level
-How to avoid “just in case” exposition with a “just in time” approach
-When realism matters—and when to lean into reader expectations

Recommended Resources

-Need a Developmental Editor? hartboundediting.com
-Author’s Alcove Membership: authorsalcove.com
-Read Addy DuLac’s books here: www.addydulacauthor.net